1. What motivates immigrants to come to the United States (today)? Consider what they lose and what they can gain in your argument.
i thank that immigrants to gain freedom, such as where ever they were maybe they did not get to do what they wanted to do. Maybe they thank coming over here they can do what they wanted to do over there without anyone saying anything.They are probably losing communication with there family and a couple pieces of furniture that dont mean nothing. I don't thank they will leave nothing to valuable. Plus coming here they can get a large variety of thing and who knows maybe they will find something they will really like that can replace something that they left.
2. Thousands of Europeans chose to move to the British colonies. Some for economic reasons and some for freedoms. If you decided to immigrate somewhere, would you move for economic reasons or for freedom?
If i was to move, i would move for the freedom. I thank a lot of things come with freedom for example: you can be free and still get a job and do what u want, but if u don't have freedom u might not work where u want to. So that's why i would choose the freedom, because it just fill good to say i am free and i can do what i want.
2 comments:
I thought that you got your point across well. There were just some grammer problems. There were a few times when you wrote "thank", and you should have wrote "think".
Ok. I see your points. Do you think there isn't enough freedom of choice of professions in the U.S.?
Lots of small errors that are keeping this post from being really good. Always capitalize I. Always spell out you. Always do a spell check, etc. I can edit this post with you to show you the mistakes I'm talking about. As is 16/20 points.
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